Essay- Outline, rough draft, final copy

OUTLINE

Thesis Statement- (I think) These holidays are the ones that need to be the most exciting! Summer holidays are the best because they can be spent at the beach, in a forest or you can chillax at your house.

1^st Paragraph:

(TS) The beach is a wonderful place to go over the summer.

·         Play beach tennis or beach volley

·         Fishing

·         Swing and explore the sea

2^nd Paragraph:

(TS) Spending your summer in a forest is a great experience.

·         Interesting plants

·         Photo camera with you

·         Pick up garbage

3^rd Paragraph:

(TS) Spending your summer holidays in your house is a fantastic idea.

·         Sleep how much you want

·         No homework

·         Invite friends over

Conclusion:

As you can see there are different ways to spend your, summer at the beach, in the woods, or at your house. 

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ROUGH DRAFT

Summer holidays are the longest holidays[f1] ; they[f2]  separate two school[f3]  years. Holidays are the best time for students and children. These holidays need to be spent the way a person likes. These[f4]  holidays are the ones that need to be the most exciting! Summer holidays [f5] are the best because they can be spent at the beach, in a forest or you can chillax at your house.

The beach is a wonderful place to go over the summer. At the beach you can do many things: play beach tennis or beach volley, go fishing out at the sea or swim and explore marine animals and plants. To stay fit and healthy over the summer you have a chance to play sports; beach tennis is a very dynamic and interesting sport. Meanwhile beach volley is quite tiring but fun. Going fishing is a very interesting hobby and entertainment, what some families do is eat the fish[f6] . Another activity is going swimming and look[f7]  for inquiring[f8]  types of fish and plants.

Spending your summer in a forest is a great experience. During the summer holidays another option is going in the woods, you can do a camp-like activity. You go search for interesting plant. You can take a photo camera with you, and take pictures of friends, landscapes (sunset is very nice) [f9] and also the meticulous things you find. If you are Earth friendly, picking up garbage is a great idea!

Spending your summer holidays in your house is a fantastic idea. Even though for some people staying in your house all summer might sound boring, it’s not! You can sleep as much as you want; there are no alarms to wake you up. You also have a chance to use what is in your room, and not stay all day with a google-[f10] document in front of you or a heavy book on your lap. A third thing you can do, is invite friends over: you can listen to music, do karaoke or play fun games like truth-or-dare!

As you can see there are different ways to spend your,[f11]  summer[f12]  at the beach, in the woods, or [f13] at your house.

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 [f1] For whom

 [f2] these

 [f3] consecutive

 [f4] Summer

 [f5] They

 [f6] After it has been caught

 [f7] search

 [f8] Inquiring or curious???

 [f9] Like the sunset

 [f10] Google document

 [f11] (delete)

 [f12] ***,

 [f13] simply

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FINAL COPY

Summer holidays are the longest holidays for school student; they separate two consecutive school years. Holidays are the best time for students and children. These holidays need to be spent the way a person likes. Summer holidays are the ones that need to be the most exciting! Summer holidays are the best because they can be spent at the beach, in a forest or you can chillax at your house.

The beach is a wonderful place to go over summer. At the beach you can do many things: play beach tennis or beach volley, go fishing out at the sea or swim and explore marine animals and plants. To stay fit and healthy over the summer you have a chance to play sports; beach tennis is a very dynamic and interesting sport. Meanwhile beach volley is quite tiring but fun. Going fishing is a very interesting hobby and entertainment, what some families do is eat the fish after it has been caught. Another activity is going swimming and search for inquiring types of fish and plants.

Spending your summer in a forest is a great experience. During the summer holidays another option is going in the woods, you can do a camp-like activity. You go search for interesting plants you can take a photo camera with you, and take pictures of friends, landascapes like the sunset and also the meticulous things you find. If you are Earth friendly, picking up garbage is a good idea!

Spending your summer holidays in your house is a fantastic idea. Even though for some people staying in your house all summer might sound boring, it’s not! You can sleep as much as you want; there are no alarms to wake you up. You also have a chance to use what is in your room, and not stay all day with a Google document in front of you or a heavy book on your lap. A third thing you can do, is invite friends over: you can listen to music, do karaoke or play fun games like truth-or-dare!

So as you can see, there are different ways to spend your summer, at the beach, in the woods, or simply at your house.